Analysis of By Morning You Were Gone



In winter, distance forced him into
silence

Spring brought us the promise of fresh captivity,
and the protection of a wish

On summer days, we played in fields,
and hid from him under the cover of bg trees

But in the fall, when our sheets could feel the mocking of
his laughter

We listened, to something only you could
hear

You smiled at me, as I tried to guard the bed against
my fear and hold you tightly against my chest

but by morning you were gone

And as I lay beside your still and quiet body, feeling the
coldness of your disappearing shadow

I thank the trees, the distance, and the spring’s promise,
—for once loving you and I

(West Philadelphia: November, 1972)


Scheme XX XX XX XA XX XX X XX XX A
Poetic Form
Metre 010101101 10 111010110100 00010101 11011101 011110010111 10011101110101 110 1101101011 1 1111111110101 11011100111 1110101 0111011101010100 10110101 110101000110 1110101 10100010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 661
Words 124
Sentences 1
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on December 08, 2016

Modified by KurtPhilipBehm on April 17, 2020

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