Analysis of Heaven And Hell



Do your words sharpen,
  as your feelings dull

Do your actions harken,
  what’s still to know

Do your wheels spin faster
  as you sink in place

Does the meaning retreat,
  as you blindly chase

Do your moments forecast,
  or serve to remind

Does the past just bookmark,
  what the future refinds

Does the master you serve,
  in false prophecy dwell

Do you still have that choice,
—between Heaven and Hell  

(Villanova Pennsylvania: July, 2016)


Scheme AX AX XB XB XX XB XC XC X
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 11101 111010 0111 111110 11101 101001 11101 11101 11101 101110 10101 101011 011001 111111 011001 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 430
Words 74
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 38
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on July 17, 2016

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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