Analysis of A Softer Rhyme



Are the feelings soft,
  but the words rock hard

Turning emotion into anger
  or worse

Are those wishes pure
  when the ink goes down

Are the letters aligned
  or off course

Are the feelings soft,
  but the sentences vile

When frustration takes over
  your rhyme

Is the Muse trying to whisper
  as you shout to the crowd …

“Step back,
 —nothing forced is sublime”

(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2016)


Scheme Ax bx xx xx Ax bc bx xc x
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 10111 100100110 11 11101 10111 101001 111 10101 101001 1010110 11 10110110 111101 11 101101 010010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 404
Words 68
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 35
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 10, 2016

Modified on April 26, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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