Analysis of The Pain I Own



Broken feelings
My chest of gold
A ransom of torment
No trinkets sold
My treasure bounteous
Walls lined with blood
Its hurt and pain
I have withstood
The jewels lack sparkle
But shimmer deep
Their cut and clarity
My soul to keep
And words disloyal
Must leave this throne
Before the lid reopens
On the pain I own

(Villanova Pennsylvania: January, 2016)


Scheme ABXBAXXXCDEDCFXF E
Poetic Form
Metre 1010 1111 01011 1101 1101 1111 1101 1101 010110 1101 110100 1111 01010 1111 0101010 10111 010010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 335
Words 62
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 02, 2016

Modified on April 17, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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