Analysis of Drifting Away



To see any clearer
I drifted away

From your
lies

From your
madness

From your paperless
tray

The word forest
called

For my pen to break
free

From the blurred
introspection

Hovering close to your
tree

And when my vision
unclouded

A bigger picture
appeared

In whose distance
I found

What your nearness
had feared

(Train In Massachusetts: March, 2015)


Scheme ab Cd Ce eb fx xg xh cg hf ai xx di x
Poetic Form Tetractys  (56%)
Metre 111010 11001 11 1 11 10 11100 1 0110 1 11111 1 101 010 100111 1 01110 1 01010 01 0110 11 111 11 100101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 326
Words 60
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 22
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Submitted on March 23, 2015

Modified on April 19, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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