Analysis of A reason to smile; Death



When I die, shed no tears, I know you won’t
A pain inside your mind revealed and fixed up
Wished to be a pain in thy heart, I failed
The pile of my funeral fire, light your life

I died then, I was happy, just my death
Put a gentle smile on your face
I cried for nights to see that,
It was easy, though couldn’t see it, alive

Now! Nothing’s there to run, nothing’s to hide
Stuck in your life, a sober, your tide
Sometimes when I see you smile, from stars
I cry then, it’s my tears, you take shower everyday

When I die and nothing’s in the atmosphere
My beloved love smiles, ‘a reason to smile!!! Death’
It’s easy, though couldn’t see it, alive
I, trying to be happy among the stars
Just couldn’t find you among them so far
I wish you live a million years, all happy
Among the circle of your loving ones
Just incase you memorize me someday
I know you’ll regret, someone long time gone.


Scheme XXXX AXXB CCDE XABDXXXEX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111111 01011101011 1110101111 011110010111 1111110111 10101111 1111111 1110111101 1101111011 101101011 011111111 1111111110101 1110100010 10111010111 110111101 11011100101 111101111 11110101110 0101011101 10111011 111011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 887
Words 173
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 9
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 168
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Submitted by Azalea Spirit on October 04, 2014

Modified on March 29, 2023

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Abinash Parajuli

Abinash Parajuli is a Nepali poet, novelist, music critic and a journalist. Currently, he's acting a CEO/Executive Editor at MuzBuzz Monthly Magazine. more…

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