Analysis of The Factories



I have shut my little sister in from life and light
(For a rose, for a ribbon, for a wreath across my hair),
I have made her restless feet still until the night,
Locked from sweets of summer and from wild spring air;
I who ranged the meadow lands, free from sun to sun,
Free to sing and pull the buds and watch the far wings fly,
I have bound my sister till her playing-time is done -
Oh, my little sister, was it I? - was it I?
I have robbed my sister of her day of maidenhood
(For a robe, for a feather, for a trinket's restless spark),
Shut from Love till dusk shall fall, how shall she know good,
How shall she pass scatheless through the sinlit dark?
I who could be innocent, I who could be gay,
I who could have love and mirth before the light went by,
I have put my sister in her mating-time away -
Sister, my young sister, - was it I? - was it I?
I have robbed my sister of the lips against her breast
(For a coin, for the weaving of my children's lace and lawn),
Feet that pace beside the loom, hands that cannot rest,
How can she know motherhood, whose strength is gone?
I who took no heed of her, starved and labor-worn,
I against whose placid heart my sleepy gold heads lie,
Round my path they cry to me, little souls unborn,
God of Life - Creator! It was I! It was I!


Scheme ABABCDCDAEFEGDGDHIHIJDJD
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101001101 10110101010111 111010110101 11111001111 11101111111 1110101010111 1111101010111 111010111111 11111010111 1011010101101 111111111111 111111011 111110011111 1111101010111 1111100010101 101110111111 1111101010101 10110101110101 111010111101 1111101111 111111010101 1011101110111 111111110111 111010111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,288
Words 260
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 967
Words per stanza (avg) 258
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 28, 2023

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Margaret Widdemer

Margaret Widdemer was a U.S. poet and novelist. She won the Pulitzer Prize in 1919 for her collection The Old Road to Paradise, shared with Carl Sandburg for Cornhuskers. more…

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