Analysis of On Somme

Ivor Gurney 1890 ( Gloucester) – 1937 ( London)



Suddenly into the still air burst thudding
And thudding and cold fear possessed me all,
On the gray slopes there, where Winter in sullen brooding
Hung between height and depth of the ugly fall
Of Heaven to earth; and the thudding was illness own.
But still a hope I kept that were we there going over
I; in the line, I should not fail, but take recover
From others courage, and not as coward be known.
No flame we saw, the noise and the dread alone
Was battle to us; men were enduring there such
And such things, in wire tangled, to shatters blown.
Courage kept, but ready to vanish at first touch.
Fear, but just held. Poets were luckier once
In the hot fray swallowed and some magnificence


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Poetic Form
Metre 1000101111 010110111 1011111001010 10110110101 110110011101 11011110111010 1001111111010 110100111011 11110100101 110111001011 011010101101 101110110111 11111001001 001110011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 686
Words 131
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 545
Words per stanza (avg) 129
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ivor Gurney

Ivor Bertie Gurney (28 August 1890 – 26 December 1937) was an English poet and composer, particularly of songs. He was born and raised in Gloucester. He suffered from manic depression through much of his life.  more…

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