Analysis of True America's Message

Bernard O'Dowd 1866 (Beaufort) – 1953



OUR manlier spirits hear and will obey   
 The Word YOU waft Australia o’er the sea—   
‘Be true, be brave, be merciful, be free!’   
Not you, who, braggart, sent this wan array   
Of hell-ships vomiting their Will-to-Slay,         5
 These armoured Hates and pallid Envies we,   
 ’Mid rattled mobs and flags hysteric, see   
Tarnish the chaste horizon of our Bay:   

But YOU we hear, our Comrades of the Cause,   
 Who face hyæna Mammon in his den:         10
   And YOU, who dared your seas of blood to spill   
To drag the swooning slave from vampire jaws:   
 Yea, YOU who freed unborn Australia, when   
   You singed King George’s beard at Bunker’s Hill.


Scheme ABBAABBA XCDXCD
Poetic Form
Metre 1011010101 0111010101 1111110011 111111101 1111001111 11101011 110101101 10010101101 1111101101 11111011 0111111111 1101011101 1111110101 1111011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 676
Words 111
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 6
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 232
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Bernard O'Dowd

Bernard Patrick O'Dowd was an Australian activist, educator, poet, journalist, and author of several law books and poetry books. O'Dowd worked as an assistant-librarian and later Chief Parliamentary Draughtsman in the Supreme Court at Melbourne for 48 years; he was also a co-publisher and writer for the radical paper Tocsin. Bernard O'Dowd lived to age 87. more…

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