Analysis of Elegy to the Old Man Hokuju

Yosa Buson 1716 (Settsu Province) – 1783



You left in the morning, at evening my heart is in a
thousand pieces.
Why is it so far away?

Thinking of you, I go up on the hill and wander.
Around the hill, why is it such a sadness?

Dandelions yellow and shepherds-purse blooming white --
not anyone to look at them.

I hear a pheasant, calling and calling fervently.
Once a friend was there across the river, living.

Ghostly smoke rises and fades away with a west wind
strong in fields of small bamboo grasses and reedy fields.
Nowhere to leave for.

Once a friend was there across the river, living, but today
not even a bird sings a song.

You left in the morning, at evening my heart is in a
thousand pieces.
Why is it so far away?

In my grass hut by the Amida image I light no candle,
offer no flowers, and only sit here alone.
This evening, how invaluable it is.

Priest Buson
with a thousand bowings


Scheme ABC xx xx xx xxx cx ABC xdx db
Poetic Form
Metre 11001011011100 1010 1111101 1011111101010 01011111010 100100101101 1101111 1101010010100 101110101010 1011001011011 1011101100101 1111 101110101010101 11001101 11001011011100 1010 1111101 01111011011110 101100101101 1101010011 11 10101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 841
Words 166
Sentences 15
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 3, 3, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Yosa Buson

Yosa Buson or Yosa no Buson was a Japanese poet and painter of the Edo period. more…

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