Analysis of On A Fortification At Boston Begun By Women
Benjamin Tompson 1642 – 1714
A Grand attempt some Amazonian Dames
Contrive whereby to glorify their names,
A Ruff for Boston Neck of mud and turfe,
Reaching from side to side from surfe to surfe,
Their nimble hands spin up like Christmas pyes,
Their pastry by degrees on high doth rise.
The wheel at home counts it an holiday,
Since while the Mistris worketh it may play.
A tribe of female hands, but manly hearts
Forsake at home their pasty-crust and tarts
To knead the dirt, the samplers down they hurle,
Their undulating silks they closely furle.
The pick-axe one as a Commandress holds,
While t'other at her awkness gently scolds.
One puffs and sweats, the other mutters why
Cant you promove your work so fast as I?
Some dig, some delve, and others hands do feel
The little waggons weight with single wheel.
And least some fainting fits the weak surprize,
They want no sack nor cakes, they are more wise.
These brave essayes draw forth Male stronger hands
More like to Dawbers then to Martial bands:
These do the work, and sturdy bulwarks raise,
But the beginners well deserve the praise.
Scheme | AABBACDDEEFFGGHHFFACIIJJ |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0101101001 010111011 0111011101 1011111111 1101111101 1101011111 011111110 11011111 011111101 011111101 1101010111 110011101 01111011 1110101101 1101010101 111111111 1111010111 010111101 011101011 1111111111 111111101 111111101 110101011 1001010101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,048 |
Words | 190 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 24 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 35 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 848 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 188 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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