Analysis of To Elsie

William Carlos Williams 1883 (Rutherford) – 1963 (Rutherford)



The pure products of America
go crazy--
mountain folk from Kentucky

or the ribbed north end of
Jersey
with its isolate lakes and

valleys, its deaf-mutes, thieves
old names
and promiscuity between

devil-may-care men who have taken
to railroading
out of sheer lust of adventure--

and young slatterns, bathed
in filth
from Monday to Saturday

to be tricked out that night
with gauds
from imaginations which have no

peasant traditions to give them
character
but flutter and flaunt

sheer rags-succumbing without
emotion
save numbed terror

under some hedge of choke-cherry
or viburnum-
which they cannot express--

Unless it be that marriage
perhaps
with a dash of Indian blood

will throw up a girl so desolate
so hemmed round
with disease or murder

that she'll be rescued by an
agent--
reared by the state and

sent out at fifteen to work in
some hard-pressed
house in the suburbs--

some doctor's family, some Elsie--
voluptuous water
expressing with broken

brain the truth about us--
her great
ungainly hips and flopping breasts

addressed to cheap
jewelry
and rich young men with fine eyes

as if the earth under our feet
were
an excrement of some sky

and we degraded prisoners
destined
to hunger until we eat filth

while the imagination strains
after deer
going by fields of goldenrod in

the stifling heat of September
Somehow
it seems to destroy us

It is only in isolate flecks that
something
is given off

No one
to witness
and adjust, no one to drive the car


Scheme XAA XAB XXX CDE XFA XAX GEX XCE AGX XXX XXE XXB HXX AEC IXX XAX XEX XXF XXH EXI XDX CIX
Poetic Form
Metre 011010100 110 1011010 101111 10 111010 101111 11 0010001 101111110 110 11111010 0111 01 1101100 111111 11 10010111 10010111 100 11001 1101001 010 1110 10111110 11 111001 0111110 01 10111001 111011100 111 101110 1111011 10 11010 11101110 111 10010 110100110 010010 010110 101011 01 01010101 0111 100 0111111 110110101 0 1100111 01010100 10 11001111 1000101 101 10111100 01011010 1 111011 111001011 10 1101 11 110 001111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,398
Words 252
Sentences 1
Stanzas 22
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 66
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 17, 2023

1:16 min read
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William Carlos Williams

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