Analysis of I Thought I'd Served Her Long Enough
Walther von der Vogelweide 1170 (Austria) – 1230 (Würzburg)
I thought I'd served her long enough,
and sat dejected and confused
despairing of the lady's love,
when something gave my hopes a boost.
You'll laugh at me (it seems so small,
more of a consolation prize)
for taking comfort there at all;
but I could feel my fortunes rise.
What cheered me was a blade of grass:
I measured out a stalk I'd plucked
(as children do to learn their luck)
and it said she'd offer me her grace.
Listen and judge if you think she might:
'She will, she won't, she will, she won't, she will.'
As much as I've tried it, it's come out right,
but you have to trust in the grass's skill.
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Metre | 11110101 01010001 01010101 11011101 11111111 1100101 11010111 11111101 11110111 11010111 11011111 011110101 100111111 1111111111 1111111111 111110011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 600 |
Words | 120 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 8 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 229 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 59 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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