Analysis of I Thought I'd Served Her Long Enough

Walther von der Vogelweide 1170 (Austria) – 1230 (Würzburg)



I thought I'd served her long enough,
and sat dejected and confused
despairing of the lady's love,
when something gave my hopes a boost.
You'll laugh at me (it seems so small,
more of a consolation prize)
for taking comfort there at all;
but I could feel my fortunes rise.

What cheered me was a blade of grass:
I measured out a stalk I'd plucked
(as children do to learn their luck)
and it said she'd offer me her grace.
Listen and judge if you think she might:
'She will, she won't, she will, she won't, she will.'
As much as I've tried it, it's come out right,
but you have to trust in the grass's skill.


Scheme XXXXABAB XXXXCDCD
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 01010001 01010101 11011101 11111111 1100101 11010111 11111101 11110111 11010111 11011111 011110101 100111111 1111111111 1111111111 111110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 600
Words 120
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 8
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 229
Words per stanza (avg) 59
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Walther von der Vogelweide

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