Analysis of Absence



Ah, happy air that, rough or soft,
   May kiss that face and stay;
And happy beams that from above
   May choose to her their way;
And happy flowers that now and then
   Touch lips more sweet than they!

But it were not so blest to be
   Or light or air or rose;
Those dainty fingers tear and toss
   The bloom that in them glows;
And come or go, both wind and ray
   She heeds not, if she knows.

But if I come thy choice should be
   Either to love or not --
For if I might I would not kiss
   And then be all forgot;
And it were best thy love to lose
   If love self-scorn begot.


Scheme XAXAXA BCXCAC BDXDXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11011111 111101 01011101 111011 010101101 111111 11011111 111111 11010101 011011 01111101 111111 11111111 101111 11111111 011101 01011111 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 588
Words 119
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Thomas William Heney

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