Analysis of The Subalterns

Thomas Hardy 1840 (Stinsford) – 1928 (Dorchester, Dorset)



"Poor wanderer," said the leaden sky,
"I fain would lighten thee,
But there are laws in force on high
Which say it must not be."

--"I would not freeze thee, shorn one," cried
The North, "knew I but how
To warm my breath, to slack my stride;
But I am ruled as thou."

--"To-morrow I attack thee, wight,"
Said Sickness. "Yet I swear
I bear thy little ark no spite,
But am bid enter there."

--"Come hither, Son," I heard Death say;
"I did not will a grave
Should end thy pilgrimage to-day,
But I, too, am a slave!"

We smiled upon each other then,
And life to me had less
Of that fell look it wore ere when
They owned their passiveness.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IXIG
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 110010101 111101 11110111 111111 11111111 011111 11111111 111111 11010111 110111 11110111 111101 11011111 111101 11110011 111101 11011101 011111 11111111 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 630
Words 138
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 09, 2023

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Thomas Hardy

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