Analysis of Neutral Tones

Thomas Hardy 1840 (Stinsford) – 1928 (Dorchester, Dorset)



WE stood by a pond that winter day,
     And the sun was white, as though chidden of God,
     And a few leaves lay on the starving sod,
        --They had fallen from an ash, and were gray.

Your eyes on me were as eyes that rove
     Over tedious riddles solved years ago;
     And some words played between us to and fro--
        On which lost the more by our love.

The smile on your mouth was the deadest thing
     Alive enough to have strength to die;
     And a grin of bitterness swept thereby
        Like an ominous bird a-wing....

Since then, keen lessons that love deceives,
     And wrings with wrong, have shaped to me
     Your face, and the God-curst sun, and a tree,
        And a pond edged with grayish leaves.


Scheme ABBA XCCX DEED FGGF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 111011101 0011111111 0011110101 1110111001 111101111 10100101101 0111011101 111011101 011111011 010111111 0011100111 11100101 11110111 01111111 1100111001 00111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 737
Words 129
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 02, 2023

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Thomas Hardy

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