Analysis of The German Legion



In the cot beside the water,
In the white cot by the water,
The white cot by the white water,
There they laid the German maid.

There they wound her, singing round her,
Deftly wound her, singing round her,
Softly wound her, singing round her,
In a shroud like a cloud.

And they decked her as they wound her,
With a wreath of leaves they bound her,
Lornest leaves they scattered round her,
Singing grief with every leaf.

Singing grief with every leaf.
Sadder grief with sadder leaf,
Sweeter leaf with sweeter grief,
So't was sung in a dark tongue.

Like a latter lily lying,
O'er whom falling leaves are sighing,
And Autumn vapours crying,
Pale and cold on misty mould,

So I saw her sweet and lowly,
Shining shining pale and holy,
Thro' the dim woe slowly slowly,
Said and sung in that dark tongue.

Such an awe her beauty lent her,
While they sang I dared not enter
That charmed ring where she was centre,
But I stood with stirring blood

Till the song fell like a billow,
And I saw them leave her pillow,
And go forth to the far willow,
For the wreath of virgin death.

And I stood beside her pillow,
While they plucked the distant willow,
And my heart rose like a billow
As I said to the pale dead-

'Oh, thou most fair and sweet virginity,
Of whom this heart that beats for thee doth know
Nor name nor story, that these limbs can be
For no man evermore, that thou must go
Cold to the cold, and that no eye shall see
That which thine unsolved womanhood doth owe
Of the incommunicable mystery
Shakes me with tears. I could kneel down by thee,
And o'er thy chill unmarriageable rest
Cry, 'Thou who shalt no more at all be prest
To any heart, one moment come to this!
And feel me weeping with thy want of bliss,
And all the unpraisèd beauties of thy breast-
Thy breast which never shall a lover kiss!''

Then I slowly left her pillow,
For they came back with the willow,
And my heart sinks as a billow
Doth implore towards the shore,

As I see the crown they weave her,
And I know that I must leave her,
And I feel that I could grieve her
Sad and sore for evermore.

And again they sang around her,
In a richer robe they wound her,
With the willow wreath they bound her,
And the loud song like a cloud

Of golden obscuration,
With the strange tongue of her nation,
Filled the house of lamentation,
Till she lay in melody,

Like a latter lily lying,
O'er whom falling leaves are sighing,
And the Autumn vapours crying,
In a dream of evening gleam.

And I saw her sweet and lowly,
Shining shining pale and holy,
Thro' the dim woe slowly slowly
Said and sung in a dark tongue.

In the cot beside the water,
The white cot by the white water,
English cot by English water
That shall see the German sea.


Scheme AaAx aaab aaaC Cccd EEex fFFd aaax gggx gggx fgfgfgffhhiihi gggj aaaj aaab kkkf EEex fFFd AAaf
Poetic Form
Metre 00101010 00111010 01110110 1110101 11101010 10101010 10101010 001101 01101110 10111110 1111010 10111001 10111001 1011101 1011101 11110011 10101010 101101110 010110 1011101 11101010 10101010 10111010 1010111 11101010 11111110 11111110 1111101 10111010 01111010 0111011 1011101 01101010 1110101 01111010 1111011 1111010100 1111111111 1111011111 111101111 1101011111 111011011 101100 1111111111 0101111 1111111111 1101110111 0111011111 0101110111 1111010101 11101010 1111101 01111010 1010101 11101110 01111110 01111110 101110 00111010 00101110 1011110 0011101 1101 10111010 10111 1110100 10101010 101101110 0010110 0011101 01101010 10101010 10111010 1010011 00101010 01110110 10111010 1110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,615
Words 515
Sentences 15
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 14, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 78
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:35 min read
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Sydney Thompson Dobell

Sydney Thompson Dobell, English poet and critic, was born at Cranbrook, Kent. more…

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