Analysis of Day That I Have Loved

Rupert Brooke 1887 (Rugby) – 1915 (Aegean Sea)




Tenderly, day that I have loved, I close your eyes,
 And smooth your quiet brow, and fold your thin dead hands.
The grey veils of the half-light deepen; colour dies.
 I bear you, a light burden, to the shrouded sands,

Where lies your waiting boat, by wreaths of the sea's making
 Mist-garlanded, with all grey weeds of the water crowned.
There you'll be laid, past fear of sleep or hope of waking;
 And over the unmoving sea, without a sound,

Faint hands will row you outward, out beyond our sight,
 Us with stretched arms and empty eyes on the far-gleaming
And marble sand. . . .
                        Beyond the shifting cold twilight,
 Further than laughter goes, or tears, further than dreaming,
There'll be no port, no dawn-lit islands!  But the drear
 Waste darkening, and, at length, flame ultimate on the deep.
Oh, the last fire -- and you, unkissed, unfriended there!
 Oh, the lone way's red ending, and we not there to weep!

(We found you pale and quiet, and strangely crowned with flowers,
 Lovely and secret as a child.  You came with us,
Came happily, hand in hand with the young dancing hours,
 High on the downs at dawn!)  Void now and tenebrous,

The grey sands curve before me. . . .
                                       From the inland meadows,
 Fragrant of June and clover, floats the dark, and fills
The hollow sea's dead face with little creeping shadows,
 And the white silence brims the hollow of the hills.

Close in the nest is folded every weary wing,
 Hushed all the joyful voices; and we, who held you dear,
Eastward we turn and homeward, alone, remembering . . .
 Day that I loved, day that I loved, the Night is here!


Scheme ABAB CDCD ECXECFGFG HIHI XJKJK CFCF
Poetic Form
Metre 100111111111 011101011111 01110111011 111011010101 1111011110110 11111110101 1111111111110 0100110101 1111110101101 1111010110110 0101 0101011 1011011110110 1011111110101 11000111100101 1011001111 1011110011111 11110100101110 100101011111 11001011011010 110111110100 0111011 1011 101101010101 010111110101 001101010101 1001110100101 1101010011111 1011010010100 111111110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,628
Words 281
Sentences 23
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 9, 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 200
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:25 min read
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Rupert Brooke

Rupert Chawner Brooke was an English poet known for his idealistic war sonnets written during the First World War, especially "The Soldier". more…

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