Analysis of Wilful Missing

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



(Deserters)
        There is a world outside the one you know,
              To which for curiousness 'Ell can't compare--
         It is the place where "wilful-missings" go,
            As we can testify, for we are there.

You may 'ave read a bullet laid us low,
           That we was gathered in "with reverent care"
         And buried proper.   But it was not so,
           As we can testify --for we are there!

They can't be certain--faces alter so
  After the old aasvogel 'ad 'is share.
The uniform's the mark by which they go--
  And--ain't it odd?--the one we best can spare.

We might 'ave seen our chance to cut the show--
  Name, number, record, an 'begin elsewhere--
Leaven'' some not too late-lamented foe
  One funeral-private-British-for 'is share.

We may 'ave took it yonder in the Low
  Bush-veldt that sends men stragglin' 'unaware
Among the Kaffirs, till their columns go,
  An 'they are left past call or count or care.

We might 'ave been your lovers long ago,
  'Usbands or children--comfort or despair.
Our death (an' burial) settles all we owe,
  An' why we done it is our own affair.

Marry again, and we will not say no,
  Nor come to barstardise the kids you bear.
Wait on in 'ope--you've all your life below
  Before you'll ever 'ear us on the stair.

There is no need to give our reasons, though
  Gawd knows we all 'ad reasons which were fair;
But other people might not judge 'em so--
  And now it doesn't matter what they were.

What man can weigh or size another's woe:
  There are some things too bitter 'ard to bear.
Suffice it we 'ave finished--Domino!
  As we can testify, for we are there,
In the side-world where "wilful-missings " go.


Scheme xabaB abab abab abab abab abab abab abax abaBa
Poetic Form
Metre 100 1101110111 11111101 11011111 111101111 1111010111 11110011001 0101011111 111101111 1111010101 10011111 01011111 0111011111 11111011101 110011011 111110101 11001010111 1111110001 1111111 010111101 1111111111 1111110101 111010101 101110010111 11111110101 1001011111 11110111 1101111101 0111011101 11111110101 1111110101 1101011111 0111010110 1111110101 1111110111 011111010 111101111 00111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,652
Words 288
Sentences 17
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 30, 2023

1:28 min read
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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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