Analysis of To James Whitcomb Riley

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



Your trail runs to the westward,
    And mine to my own place;
  There is water between our lodges,
    And I have not seen your face.

But since I have read your verses
     'Tis easy to  guess the rest,--
  Because in the hearts of the children
    There is neither East nor West.

Born to a thousand fortunes
   Of good or evil hap,
 Once they were kings together,
   Throned in a mother's lap.

Surely they know that secret--
   Yellow and black and white--
When they meet as kings together
   In innocent dreams at night.

By a moon they all can play with--
  Grubby and grimed and unshod,
Very happy together,
  And very near to God.

Your trail runs to the westward,
  And mine to my own place:
There is water between our lodges,
  And you cannot see my face.--

And that is well--for crying
  Should neither be written nor seen,
But if I call you Smoke-in-the-Eyes,
 I know you will know what I mean.


Scheme ABCb cdxd xefe xgfg xafx ABCb xhxh
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1111010 011111 1110011010 0111111 11111110 1101101 010011010 1110111 1101010 111101 1101010 100101 1011110 100101 11111010 0100111 10111111 100101 1010010 010111 1111010 011111 1110011010 0110111 0111110 11011011 111111001 11111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 887
Words 166
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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