Analysis of The Broken Men

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



For things we never mention,
  For Art misunderstood --
For excellent intention
  That did not turn to good;
From ancient tales' renewing,
  From clouds we would not clear --
Beyond the Law's pursuing
  We fled, and settled here.

We took no tearful leaving,
  We bade no long good-byes;
Men talked of crime and thieving,
  Men wrote of fraud and lies.
To save our injured feelings
  'T was time and time to go --
Behind was dock and Dartmoor,
  Ahead lay Callao!

The widow and the orphan
  That pray for ten per cent,
They clapped their trailers on us
  To spy the road we went.
They watched the foreign sailings
  (They scan the shipping still),
And that's your Christian people
  Returning good for ill!

God bless the thoughtfull islands
  Where never warrants come;
God bless the just Republics
  That give a man a home,
That ask no foolish questions,
  But set him on his feet;
And save his wife and daughters
  From the workhouse and the street!

On church and square and market
  The noonday silence falls;
You'll hear the drowsy mutter
  Of the fountain in our halls.
Asleep amid the yuccas
  The city takes her ease --
Till twilight brings the land-wind
  To the clicking jalousies.

Day long the diamond weather,
  The high, unaltered blue --
The smell of goats and incense
  And the mule-bells tinkling through.
Day long the warder ocean
  That keeps us from our kin,
And once a month our levee
  When the English mail comes in.

You'll find us up and waiting
  To treat you at the bar;
You'll find us less exclusive
  Than the average English are.
We'll meet you with a carriage,
  Too glad to show you round,
But -- we do not lunch on steamers,
  For they are English ground.

We sail o' nights to England
  And join our smiling Boards --
Our wives go in with Viscounts
  And our daughters dance with Lords,
But behind our princely doings,
  And behind each coup we make,
We feel there's Something Waiting,
  And -- we meet It when we wake.

Ah God! One sniff of England --
  To greet our flesh and blood --
To hear the traffic slurring
  Once more through London mud!
Our towns of wasted honour --
  Our streets of lost delight!
How stands the old Lord Warden?
  Are Dover's cliffs still white?


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111010 11001 1100010 111111 1101010 111111 0101010 110101 1111010 111111 1111010 111101 11101010 1110111 011101 0111 0100010 111111 1111011 110111 110101 110101 0111010 010111 110110 110101 1101010 110101 1111010 111111 0111010 101001 1101010 01101 1101010 10100101 010101 010101 111011 10101 1101010 010101 0111001 00111001 1101010 1111101 01011010 1010110 1111010 111101 1111010 10100101 1111010 111111 11111110 111101 1111110 0110101 10110110 01010111 101101010 0011111 1111010 0111111 1111110 1110101 1101010 111101 1011101 1011101 1101110 110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,139
Words 393
Sentences 19
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 72
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 184
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 11, 2023

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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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