Analysis of The Hidden Tide

Roderic Quinn 1867 (Surry Hills, New South Wales) – 1949 (Darlinghurst, New South Wales)



WITHIN the world a second world   
 That circles ceaselessly:   
Stars in the sky and sister stars—   
 Turn in your eyes and see!   

Tides of the sea that rise and fall,           
 Aheave from Pole to Pole—   
And kindred swayings, veiled but felt,   
 That noise along the soul.   

Yon moon, noon-rich, high-throned, remote,   
 And pale with pride extreme,           
Draws up the sea, but what white moon   
 Exalts the tide of Dream?   

The Fisher-Folk who cast their nets   
 In Vision’s golden tide   
Oft bring to light misshapen shells,           
 And nothing worth beside.   

And so their worn hands droop adown,   
 Their singing throats are dumb;   
The Inner-Deep withholds its pearls   
 Till turn of tide be come.           

But patience! wait—the good tide turns,   
 The waters inward set;   
And lo, behold! aleap, alive   
 With glowing fish the net!   

O Toilers of the Hidden Seas!           
 Ye have strange gain and loss,   
Dragging the Deeps of Soul for pearls,   
 And ofttimes netting dross.   

Flushed to the lips with golden light,   
 And dark with sable gloom;           
Thrilled by a thousand melodies,   
 And silent like a tomb.   

Fierce are the winds across your realm,   
 As though some Demon veiled   
Had loosed the gales of Spirit-land           
 To ravage ways unsailed.   

But still sweet hours befall at times,   
 Rich-lit and full of ease;   
The afterglow is like the light   
 Of sunset on tired seas.           

And worse, perhaps, may be the lot   
 Of those whose fate is sleep;   
The sodden souls without a tide,   
 Dense as a rotten deep.   

Pain paves the way for keener joy,         
 And wondrous thoughts uproll   
When the large moon of Peace looks down   
 On high tide in the soul.


Scheme ABXB XCXC XDED XFXF EGHG XIXI JKHK LMJM XXXA XJLJ XNFN XBXC
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 01010101 110100 10010101 101101 11011101 11111 0101111 110101 11111101 011101 11011111 010111 01011111 010101 11110101 010101 0111111 110111 0101111 111111 11010111 010101 0101101 110101 1110101 111101 10011111 01101 11011101 011101 11010100 010101 11010111 111101 11011101 11011 111100111 110111 0101101 111101 01011101 111111 01010101 110101 11011101 01011 10111111 111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,740
Words 273
Sentences 16
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 13, 2023

1:21 min read
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Roderic Quinn

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