Analysis of Daisy

Richard Aldington 1892 (Portsmouth) – 1962



Plus quan se atque suos amavit omnes,
nunc...
- Catullus

You were my playmate by the sea.
We swam together.
Your girl's body had no breasts.

We found prawns among the rocks;
We liked to feel the sun and to do nothing;
In the evening we played games with the others.

It made me glad to be by you.

Sometimes I kissed you,
And you were always glad to kiss me;
But I was afraid - I was only fourteen.

And I had quite forgotten you,
You and your name.

To-day I pass through the streets.
She who touches my arms and talks with me
Is - who knows? - Helen of Sparta,
Dryope, Laodamia ...

And there are you
A whore in Oxford Street.


Scheme ABA AXA ABA C CDX CX ADXD CX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1 1 1011101 11010 1110111 1110101 11110101110 00101111010 11111111 01111 01011111 11101111011 01110101 1011 1111101 1110110111 11110110 11 0111 010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 630
Words 126
Sentences 13
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 1, 3, 2, 4, 2
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Richard Aldington

Richard Aldington, born Edward Godfree Aldington, was an English writer and poet. more…

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