Analysis of Unbreakable

Mirabai 1498 (Kudki, Pali district, Jodhpur State) – 1556 (Dwaraka)



Unbreakable, O Lord,
Is the love
That binds me to You:
Like a diamond,
It breaks the hammer that strikes it.

My heart goes into You
As the polish goes into the gold.
As the lotus lives in its water,
I live in You.

Like the bird
That gazes all night
At the passing moon,
I have lost myself dwelling in You.

O my Beloved - Return.


Scheme XXAXX AXXA XXXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 010011 101 11111 1010 11010111 111011 101010101 101010110 1101 101 11011 10101 11111001 110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 336
Words 69
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 15, 2023

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Mirabai

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