Analysis of Listen

Mirabai 1498 (Kudki, Pali district, Jodhpur State) – 1556 (Dwaraka)



Listen, my friend, this road is the heart opening,
kissing his feet, resistance broken, tears all night.

If we could reach the Lord through immersion in water,
I would have asked to be born a fish in this life.
If we could reach Him through nothing but berries and wild nuts
then surely the saints would have been monkeys when they came from the womb!
If we could reach him by munching lettuce and dry leaves
then the goats would surely get to the Holy One before us!

If the worship of stone statues could bring us all the way,
I would have adored a granite mountain years ago.


Scheme XX XXXXXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 101111101100 101101010111 1111011010010 111111101011 11111110110011 1100111110111101 1111111010011 101110110101011 1010111111101 1110101010101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 587
Words 111
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 6, 2
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mirabai

Mirabai was a 16th-century Hindu mystic poet and devotee of Lord Krishna. more…

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