Analysis of I am pale with longing for my beloved;

Mirabai 1498 (Kudki, Pali district, Jodhpur State) – 1556 (Dwaraka)



I am pale with longing for my beloved;
     People believe I am ill.
Seizing on every possible pretext,
     I try to meet him 'by accident.'

They have sent for a country doctor;
     He grabs my arm and prods it;
How can he diagnose my pain?
     It's in my heart that I am afflicted.

Go home, country doctor,
     Don't address me by my name;
It's the name of God that has wounded me,
     Don't force your medicines on me.

The sweetness of his lips is a pot of nectar,
     That's the only curd for which I crave;
Mira's Lord is Giridhar Naagar.
     He will feed me nectar again and again.

[Translated by Nita Ramaiya]


Scheme XXXX AXXX AXBB AXAX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101101 1001111 1011001001 111111100 111101010 1111011 1110111 1011111010 111010 111111 1011111101 11110011 010111101110 101011111 11111 11111001001 0101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 614
Words 116
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 15, 2023

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Mirabai

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