Analysis of At the Twilight

Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi 1207 (Balkh) – 1273 (Konya )



At the twilight, a moon appeared in the sky;
Then it landed on earth to look at me.

Like a hawk stealing a bird at the time of prey;
That moon stole me and rushed back into the sky.

I looked at myself, I did not see me anymore;
For in that moon, my body turned as fine as soul.

The nine spheres disappeared in that moon;
The ship of my existence drowned in that sea.


Scheme AB XA XX XB
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101001 1110111111 101100110111 11110110101 11111111101 101111011111 01101011 01110101011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 370
Words 78
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 29, 2023

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Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi

Jalāl ad-Dīn Muhammad Rūmī also known as Jalāl ad-Dīn Muhammad Balkhī, and more popularly simply as Rumi, was a 13th-century Persian poet, faqih, Islamic scholar, theologian, and Sufi mystic originally from Greater Khorasan in Greater Iran. more…

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