Analysis of Tanka 07

Masaoki Shiki 1867 (Matsuyama, Ehime) – 1902 (Tokyo)



on the pine needles,
each of the slender needles,
a dewdrop rests—
a thousand pearls lie
quivering, yet never fall


Scheme AABCD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Lanturne  (40%)
Metre 10110 1101010 011 01011 1001101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 120
Words 22
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 22, 2023

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Masaoki Shiki

Masaoka Shiki, pen-name of Masaoka Noboru was a Japanese poet, author, and literary critic in Meiji period Japan. more…

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