Analysis of Song of Fortune VI

Khalil Gibran 1883 (Bsharri) – 1931 (New York City)



Man and I are sweethearts
He craves me and I long for him,
But alas! Between us has appeared
A rival who brings us misery.
She is cruel and demanding,
Possessing empty lure.
Her name is Substance.
She follows wherever we go
And watches like a sentinel, bringing
Restlessness to my lover.

I ask for my beloved in the forest,
Under the trees, by the lakes.
I cannot find him, for Substance
Has spirited him to the clamorous
City and placed him on the throne
Of quaking, metal riches.

I call for him with the voice of
Knowledge and the song of Wisdom.
He does not hearken, for Substance
Has enticed him into the dungeon
Of selfishness, where avarice dwells.

I seek him in the field of Contentment,
But I am alone, for my rival has
Imprisoned him in the cave of gluttony
And greed, and locked him there
With painful chains of gold.

I call to him at dawn, when Nature smiles,
But he does not hear, for excess has
Laden his drugged eyes with sick slumber.

I beguile him at eventide, when Silence rules
And the flowers sleep. But he responds not,
For his fear over what the morrow will Bring,
shadows his thoughts.

He yearns to love me;
He asks for me in this own acts. But he
Will find me not except in God's acts.
He seeks me in the edifices of his glory
Which he has built upon the bones of others;
He whispers to me from among
His heaps of gold and silver;
But he will find me only by coming to
The house of Simplicity which God has built
At the brink of the stream of affection.

He desires to kiss me before his coffers,
But his lips will never touch mine except
In the richness of the pure breeze.

He asks me to share with him his
Fabulous wealth, but I will not forsake God's
Fortune; I will not cast off my cloak of beauty.

He seeks deceit for medium; I seek only
The medium of his heart.
He bruises his heart in his narrow cell;
I would enrich his heart with all my love.

My beloved has learned how to shriek and
Cry for my enemy, Substance; I would
Teach him how to shed tears of affection
And mercy from the eyes of his soul
For all things,
And utter sighs of contentment through
Those tears.

Man is my sweetheart;
I want to belong to him.


Scheme ABXCDXEXDF XXEAXX GXEHX XICXX XIF XXDX CCXCJXFKXH JXX XXC CLXG XXHXXKX LB
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 11101111 101011101 010111100 11100010 010101 01110 11001011 0101010010 1001110 1111010010 1001101 11011110 11001101 10011101 1101010 11111011 10001110 1111110 101101010 110011001 1110011010 1110111101 01010011100 010111 110111 1111111101 11111111 101111110 1011111101 0010111011 11110101011 111 11111 1111011111 111101011 1110011110 11110101110 11011101 1111010 11111101101 01101001111 1011011010 101011101110 1111101101 00101011 11111111 10011111011 101111111110 110111001110 0100111 1101101101 1101111111 101111110 1111001011 1111111010 010101111 111 010110101 11 1111 1110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,151
Words 417
Sentences 23
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 10, 6, 5, 5, 3, 4, 10, 3, 3, 4, 7, 2
Lines Amount 62
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

2:05 min read
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Khalil Gibran

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