Analysis of A Little Girl's Prayer

Katherine Mansfield 1888 (Wellington) – 1923 (Fontainebleau, Île-de-France)



Grant me the moment, the lovely moment
That I may lean forth to see
The other buds, the other blooms,
The other leaves on the tree:

That I may take into my bosom
The breeze that is like his brother,
But stiller, lighter, whose faint laughter
Exhoes the joy of the other.

Above on the blue and white cloud-spaces
There are small clouds at play.
I watch their remote, mysterious play-time
In the other far-away.

Grant I may hear the small birds singing
the song that the silence knows...
(The Light and the Shadow whisper together,
The lovely moment grows,

Ripples into the air like water
Away and away without sound,
And the little girl gets up from her praying
On the cold ground)


Scheme XAXA XBBB XCXC DEBE BFDF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 1101001010 1111111 01010101 0101101 111101110 01111110 110101110 1011010 0110101110 111111 11101010011 0010101 111101110 0110101 0100110010 010101 100101110 01001011 00101111010 1011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 669
Words 126
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 08, 2023

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Katherine Mansfield

Katherine Mansfield Beauchamp Murry was a prominent modernist writer of short fiction who was born and brought up in colonial New Zealand and wrote under the pen name of Katherine Mansfield. more…

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