Analysis of The Poor Can Feed the Birds

John Shaw Neilson 1872 (Penola, South Australia) – 1942 (Melbourne, Victoria)



Ragged, unheeded, stooping, meanly shod,
The poor pass to the pond: not far away
The spires go up to God.

Shyly they come from the unpainted lane;
Coats have they made of old unhappiness
That keeps in every pain.

The rich have fear, perchance their God is dim;
’Tis with the hope of stored-up happiness
They build the spires to Him.

The rich go out in clattering pomp and dare
In the most holy places to insult
The deep Benevolence there.

But ’tis the poor who make the loving words.
Slowly they stoop; it is a Sacrament:
The poor can feed the birds.

Old, it is old, this scattering of the bread,
Deep as forgiveness, or the tears that go
Out somewhere to the dead.

The feast of love, the love that is the cure
For all indignities—it reigns, it calls,
It chains us to the pure.

Seldom they speak of God, He is too dim;
So without thought of after happiness
They feed the birds for Him.

The rich men walk not here on the green sod,
But they have builded towers, the timorous
That still go up to God.

Still will the poor go out with loving words;
In the long need, the need for happiness
The poor can feed the birds.


Scheme axa bxb cdc exe fxF gxg hxh cdc ada fdF
Poetic Form Etheree  (23%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 100101011 0111011101 011111 1011100101 1111110100 1101001 0111011111 1101111100 110111 01110100101 0011010101 0101001 1101110101 1011110100 011101 11111100101 1101010111 11101 0111011101 1101001111 111101 1011111111 1011110100 110111 0111111011 1111100100 111111 1101111101 0011011100 011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,099
Words 216
Sentences 12
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 09, 2023

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John Shaw Neilson

John Shaw Neilson was an Australian poet. Slightly built, for most of his life he worked as a labourer, fruit-picking, clearing scrub, navvying and working in quarries, and, after 1928, working as a messenger with the Country Roads Board in Melbourne. he died when he was 70 years old. more…

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