Analysis of Ownerless

John Shaw Neilson 1872 (Penola, South Australia) – 1942 (Melbourne, Victoria)



He comes when the gullies are wrapped in the gloaming
And limelights are trained on the tops of the gums,
To stand at the sliprails, awaiting the homing
Of one who marched off to the beat of the drums.

So handsome he looked in the putties and khaki,
Light-hearted he went like a youngster to play;
But why comes he never to speak to his Darkie,
Around at the rails at the close of the day?

And why have the neighbours foregathered so gently,
Their horses a-doze at the fence in a row?
And what are they talkin' of, softly, intently?
And why are the women-folk lingering so?

One hand, soft and small, that so often caressed him,
Was trembling just now as it fondled his head;
But what was that trickling warm drop that distressed him?
And what were those heart-broken words that she said?

Ne'er brighter the paddocks that bushmen remember
The green and the gold and the pink have displayed,
When Spring weaves a wreath for the brows of September,
Enrobed like a queen, and a-blush like a maid.

The gums are a-shoot and the wattles a-cluster,
The cattle are roaming the ranges astray;
But why are they late with the hunt and the muster?
And why is the black horse unsaddled to-day?

Hard by at the station the training commences,
In circles they're schooling the hacks for the shows;
The high-mettled hunters are sent at the fences,
And satins and dapples the brushes disclose.

Sound-winded and fit and quite ready is Darkie,
Impatient to strip for the sprint and the flight;
But what can he keeping the rider in khaki?
And why does the silence hang heavy to-night?

Ah, surely he'll come, when the waiting is ended,
To fly the stiff fences and take him in hand,
Blue-ribboned once more, and three-quarters extended,
Hard-held for the cheers from the fence and the stand.

Still there can the cross-beam the saddle hangs idle.
The cobweb around the loose stirrup is spun;
The rust's on the spurs, and the dust on the bridle,
And gathering mould on the badges he won.

We'll take the old horse to the paddocks tomorrow,
Where grasses are waving breast-high on the plain;
And there with the clean-skins we'll turn him in sorrow
And muster him never, ah, never, again.

The bush bird will sing when the shadows are creeping
A sweet plaintive note, soft and clear as a bell's -
Oh, would it might ring where the bush boy is sleeping,
And colour his dreams by the far Dardanelles.


Scheme ABAB CDCD CECE FGFG HIHI HDHD JKJK CLCL MNMN OPOP EXEX AXAB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (92%)
Metre 111010110010 0111101101 11101010010 11111101101 11011001010 11011101011 111110111110 01101101101 011011110 11001101001 011110110010 01101011001 111011110011 110011111011 111110111011 01011101111 11001110010 01001001101 111011011010 1101001101 011010010010 01011001001 111111010010 011011111 111010010010 01011001101 01110111010 0100101001 110010110110 01011101001 111110010010 01101011011 110111010110 11011001101 11110110010 11101101001 111011010110 0101011011 011010011010 01001101011 1101110101 11011011101 011011111010 01011011001 01111101110 01101101101 111111011110 01111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,329
Words 429
Sentences 19
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 155
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:10 min read
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John Shaw Neilson

John Shaw Neilson was an Australian poet. Slightly built, for most of his life he worked as a labourer, fruit-picking, clearing scrub, navvying and working in quarries, and, after 1928, working as a messenger with the Country Roads Board in Melbourne. he died when he was 70 years old. more…

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