Analysis of Erskine

John Le Gay Brereton 1871 (Sydney) – 1933



A singing voice is in my dream
The voice of Erskine, on his boulders,
Babbling and shouting till he shoulders
Stoutly against the heavier stream.

No longer now my curtained sight,
On serried books and pictures dwelling,
Of long-neglected work is telling,
But looks beyond the travelling night.

And here no longer is my home,
For you and I are far asunder:
I hear again the cascade thunder
And watch the little pool of foam.

And where the water, pouring sleek,
In sudden whiteness flings his treasure,
I see you sitting, Queen of Pleasure,
Clad only by the glittering creek.

I hold my arms to you once more,
For O my longing flesh is aching,
And you, your rocky throne forsaking,
Come cool and radiant to the shore.

I see my girl of girls recline
On smooth rock sloping to the water;
Then savagely have leapt and caught her,
And limpid eyes look up at mine.

Love, Love, O Love, the embracing sun,
The trees, the creek, the earth our mother,
Who made that hour, give such another,
And make us—see us—know us one.


Scheme ABBA CDDC EFFE GFFG HDDH IFFI JFFJ
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 01011011 01111110 1000101110 100101001 1101111 11101010 110101110 110101001 01110111 110111010 110100110 01010111 01010101 010101110 111101110 110101001 11111111 111101110 011101010 110100101 11111101 111101010 110011010 0111111 111100101 0101011010 1111011010 01111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 995
Words 186
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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John Le Gay Brereton

John Le Gay Brereton was an Australian poet, critic and professor of English at the University of Sydney. He was the first president of the Fellowship of Australian Writers when it was formed in Sydney in 1928. more…

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