Analysis of At Utter Loaf

James Whitcomb Riley 1849 (Greenfield) – 1916 (Indianapolis)



An afternoon as ripe with heat
As might the golden pippin be
With mellowness if at my feet
It dropped now from the apple-tree
My hammock swings in lazily.

The boughs about me spread a shade
That shields me from the sun, but weaves
With breezy shuttles through the leaves
Blue rifts of skies, to gleam and fade
Upon the eyes that only see
Just of themselves, all drowsily.

Above me drifts the fallen skein
Of some tired spider, looped and blown,
As fragile as a strand of rain,
Across the air, and upward thrown
By breaths of hayfields newly mown--
So glimmering it is and fine,
I doubt these drowsy eyes of mine.

Far-off and faint as voices pent
In mines, and heard from underground,
Come murmurs as of discontent,
And clamorings of sullen sound
The city sends me, as, I guess,
To vex me, though they do but bless
Me in my drowsy fastnesses.

I have no care. I only know
My hammock hides and holds me here
In lands of shade a prisoner:
While lazily the breezes blow
Light leaves of sunshine over me,
And back and forth and to and fro
I swing, enwrapped in some hushed glee,
Smiling at all things drowsily.


Scheme ABABB CDDCBE FGFGFHH IJIJKKD LXXEBLBE
Poetic Form
Metre 1011111 11010101 111111 11110101 11010100 01011101 11110111 11010101 11111101 01011101 110111 01110101 111010101 11010111 01010101 1111101 11001101 11110111 11011101 0101110 11011001 011101 01011111 11111111 101101 11111101 11010111 01110100 11000101 1111101 01010101 1110111 101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,094
Words 214
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 7, 7, 8
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 174
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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James Whitcomb Riley

James Whitcomb Riley was an American writer, poet, and best-selling author. During his lifetime he was known as the "Hoosier Poet" and "Children's Poet" for his dialect works and his children's poetry respectively. more…

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