Analysis of Malvern Hill

Herman Melville 1819 – 1891



Ye elms that wave on Malvern Hill
In prime of morn and May,
Recall ye how McClellan's men
Here stood at bay?
While deep within yon forest dim
Our rigid comrades lay -
Some with the cartridge in their mouth,
Others with fixed arms lifted South -
Invoking so
The cypress glades? Ah wilds of woe!

The spires of Richmond, late beheld
Through rifts in musket-haze,
Were closed from view in clouds of dust
On leaf-walled ways,
Where streamed our wagons in caravan;
And the Seven Nights and Days
Of march and fast, retreat and fight,
Pinched our grimed faces to ghastly plight -
Does the elm wood
Recall the haggard beards of blood?

The battle-smoked flag, with stars eclipsed,
We followed (it never fell!) -
In silence husbanded our strength -
Received their yell;
Till on this slope we patient turned
With cannon ordered well;
Reverse we proved was not defeat;
But ah, the sod what thousands meet! -
Does Malvern Wood
Bethink itself, and muse and brood?

We elms of Malvern Hill
Remember every thing;
But sap the twig will fill:
Wag the world how it will,
Leaves must be green in Spring.


Scheme ABXBXBCCDD EFEFXFEEEE EGXGEGEEEE AHAAH
Poetic Form Tetractys  (29%)
Metre 11111101 011101 11111 1111 11011101 101011 11010011 10111101 0101 01011111 0111011 110101 01110111 1111 111010010 0010101 11010101 1101101101 1011 1010111 010111101 1101101 0101101 0111 11111101 110101 01111101 11011101 1101 1010101 111101 0101001 110111 101111 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,061
Words 198
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 10, 10, 10, 5
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 212
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 08, 2023

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Herman Melville

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