Analysis of Will I ever be enough



                Will I ever be enough

Roses are red
Violets are blue
But pain will always be pain

The thought of giving up who I am isn't it                           enough for you
The people I replaced with the love you
          gave can't seem to rejoice you
And the hatred you gave me in return for
     your love doesn't please you at all
Will I ever be enough for you

Will I ever be what you need in life  
      without any compromise
Will I ever be your pride that you can be
                         proud of
Can't you accept me for who I am
I'm I the burden that you can't get off
                      your shoulders
Is it my sacrifices that are not enough
                           for you
Will I ever be enough

The spirit that is broken
Trust that will never be regained
And all I ask is that.....................
Will I ever be enough


Scheme A xbx bbbxxb xxxxxxxabA xxxA
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 1011 10011 111111 0111011111010111 010111011 1111011 00101110011 11101111 111010111 1110111101 011010 11101111111 11 110111111 1101011111 110 11110011101 11 1110101 0101110 11110101 011111 1110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 874
Words 171
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 6, 10, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

The poem is about a girl who has been trying by all means to be accepted by her mother and people around her but it all ends in vain . Now she is asking whether will she ever be enough for them

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Written on April 24, 2024

Submitted by Pontshowmarotola on April 24, 2024

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