Analysis of Black Irish



Twas blowing full a gale, trees raged ‘neath churning sky.
And as the lightning glared false day the horseman thundered by.
Bent low upon his frothing steed,
Bent low 'neath riven sky cape billowing like a shroud,
The horseman thundered by.
Steel hooves against the stony path kicked sparks, red and bright.
Fire above and fire beneath companied the horseman in the night.

He felt his Hunter tiring, for many miles they'd gone,
But as if pursued by hounds from the pit he drove the Hunter on.
And as each flash of lightning was blinded by the next
He spurred Black Irish harder, though the steed was sorely vexed.

Claire, sweet Claire, had sent a note, they'd quarreled; she was contrite,
And was the whip that lashed him as he urged Black Irish in full flight.
She'd jeweled lips and raven hair, her smile turned night to day.
And with these thoughts his mind overflowing, he did not heed the way.

He could not know the swollen race had swept the bridge away.
His mind was filled with thoughts of Claire,
And he did not heed the way.

Claire waited nigh the arbor gate, with her hair the wind made free,
As she waited for her horseman to come thundering o'er the lea,
But riderless came the black horse, riderless to where she stayed.
She stood struck dumb by the vision, 'tis only a dream, she prayed.
For she knew he rode like Castor, while he had life saddled, he stayed.
Her heart froze in her breast. Tis only a dream, she prayed.

She climbed upon the black horse, and he thundered on once more,
Sides heaving like a bellows, as frightened Claire he bore.
His wind came like fire, legs quivering from the strain.
Though his heart beat like Thor's hammer, he gave no thought,
Save to the next hill he must gain.

Claire tried to slow the Hunter, for she knew the beast was in pain.
She could feel the black horse falter, but he would not answer to the rein.
Anon, he brought his charge to the water's edge and lay down neath a willow.
He thought it good to rest there and use the soft earth for his pillow.

With a strength that was beyond her, Claire pulled the horseman from the rill.
His face was pale with death; herself she thought to kill,
For without her horseman, of this world, there was nothing left.
She knelt beside him, her dagger in hand; but hold, he still had breath.
She had saved the horseman; but low, there was a cost.
His great heart had ceased its pounding, Black Irish, he was lost.

They buried Irish 'neath that willow, and the horseman said this prayer,
God, I do not know if you take note of horses,
But tis a fine one resting there."      
                                                          


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Poetic Form
Metre 110101111101 01010111010101 1101111 1111011100101 010101 1101010111101 1001010011010001 1111010110111 1110111101110101 0111110110101 11110101011101 11111011101101 0101111111110011 1110101011111 011111100111101 11110101110101 11111111 0111101 110101011010111 11101010111001001 11101111111 111110101100111 1111111011111011 0110011100111 11010110110111 1101010110111 1111101100101 111111101111 11011111 111101011101101 11101110111110101 1111110101011101 1111111010111110 1011101011010101 111111011111 10101011111101 1101101001111111 111010111101 11111110110111 110101110010111 111111111110 11011101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 2,724
Words 531
Sentences 32
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 7, 4, 4, 3, 6, 5, 4, 6, 3
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 222
Words per stanza (avg) 53

About this poem

It Is about a heroic horse who plays a pivotal role with two young lovers.

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Written on April 17, 2023

Submitted by f.vanman on April 17, 2024

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