Analysis of He Wants To Be A Man



Lord this boy is bright
as a ten-watt lightbulb
well, he needs some home-schooling
to properly integrate himself
into our society
Lord, don't send this boy to hell
take the gun out of his hands
please give this boy a chance
Oh Lord, don't let him drink
from the poison well
just because he wants to be a man


Scheme ABCDEFGHIFJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 10111 1111110 11001001 01100100 1111111 1011111 111101 111111 10101 101111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 307
Words 59
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 242
Words per stanza (avg) 59
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Written on May 04, 2024

Submitted by ggolden9 on May 04, 2024

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