Analysis of Hymn of the Moravian Nuns of Bethlehem at the Consecration of Pulaski's Banner

Henry Wadsworth Longfellow 1807 (Portland) – 1882 (Cambridge)



When the dying flame of day
Through the chancel shot its ray,
Far the glimmering tapers shed
Faint light on the cowled head;
And the censer burning swung,
Where, before the altar, hung
The crimson banner, that with prayer
Had been consecrated there.
And the nuns' sweet hymn was heard the while,
Sung low, in the dim, mysterious aisle.

"Take thy banner!  May it wave
    Proudly o'er the good and brave;
    When the battle's distant wail
    Breaks the sabbath of our vale.
    When the clarion's music thrills
    To the hearts of these lone hills,
    When the spear in conflict shakes,
    And the strong lance shivering breaks.

"Take thy banner! and, beneath
    The battle-cloud's encircling wreath,
    Guard it, till our homes are free!
    Guard it!  God will prosper thee!
    In the dark and trying hour,
    In the breaking forth of power,
    In the rush of steeds and men,
    His right hand will shield thee then.

"Take thy banner!  But when night
     Closes round the ghastly fight,
     If the vanquished warrior bow,
     Spare him!  By our holy vow,
     By our prayers and many tears,
     By the mercy that endears,
     Spare him! he our love hath shared!
     Spare him! as thou wouldst be spared!

"Take thy banner! and if e'er
     Thou shouldst press the soldier's bier,
     And the muffled drum should beat
     To the tread of mournful feet,
     Then this crimson flag shall be
     Martial cloak and shroud for thee."

The warrior took that banner proud,
And it was his martial cloak and shroud!


Scheme AABBCCDDEE FFGGHHII JJKKLLMM NNOOXHPP LXQQKK RR
Poetic Form
Metre 1010111 101111 10100101 111011 0010101 1010101 01010111 111001 001111101 1100101001 1110111 10100101 1010101 10101101 101101 1011111 1010101 00111001 1110001 010101001 11110111 1111101 00101010 00101110 0011101 1111111 1110111 1010101 10101001 11110101 11010101 101011 11110111 1111111 11100110 1110101 0010111 1011101 1110111 1010111 010011101 011110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,506
Words 254
Sentences 20
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 10, 8, 8, 8, 6, 2
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 183
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 10, 2023

1:17 min read
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Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Henry Wadsworth Longfellow was an American poet and educator whose works include "Paul Revere's Ride", The Song of Hiawatha, and Evangeline. more…

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