Analysis of Companionship with merits



Remember when we boast about the coats we wore,
The expressive of merits we grew to own and adore,
A closeness of assurance we learned to behold,
While far from home we unburdened to each other because of the work we do,
Being part of a team together we grew,
Learning and growing living the best way we knew,
Remember the cigars and bbq's we shared,
From a distance under the desert sun we afforded some things together showing how well we do care,
Enjoying the silence together in a presence of companionship and conversations were a pleasure,
During the evenings we admired the stars above,
Until sounds like foghorn remind us to duck and cover,
Meeting others to remind them our presence to help manage stressors,
Removing stigma that deem our presence to be so hurtful seeking behavioral health care.


Scheme AABCCCDEFGFHE
Poetic Form
Metre 010111010111 00101101111001 010101011101 1111101011100110111 10110101011 100101001111 0100010111 10101001011010110101011111 0100100100010101000100010 1001010100101 0111101111010 101010111010111010 010101110101111010010011
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 805
Words 153
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 50
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 651
Words per stanza (avg) 141

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Shared moments under the desert sun of IRQ.

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Written on April 01, 2024

Submitted on April 01, 2024

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