Analysis of Rapid Libations



Monolithic conflicts forced to permit.
Mental sickness.
Has to be stopped from where it sits.
With a nipping it at the bud.
To prevent the spreading of it.

Rapid libations.
Devoted without faith shakened.
Will crumble monolithic conflicts.
Down to find them found to bits.
In minds to exist.
Gone to go from where they grow.
Up.
To minimize away from unconscious,
And blinded minds.

What has happened to those rituals?
To believe them spiritual.
Protective and effective.

What has happened to faith prioritize.
Abandoned by many once known wise.
Now...
These days easily compromised.
By politics fictioned to delude,
A better life to live is to exclude the truth.
Mentally removed from reality.
And seduced to crave what the fools do!
Keeping them muted.
Keeping them hushed.
Keeping them rushing,
To feel that crushing sensation.
Under a bus.

Monolithic conflicts.
Endorsed to permit.
As if this hypnotic condition,
Provides and deliver its benefits.
Pursued.
Trusted.
And soothes,
Everybody out their minds.
Feeling fine.
Leaving faith and making libations,
Behind!

Not one war to seek for more,
Makes people creating them great!
Not one war to seek for more,
Leaves taxpayers celebrating...
The high cost it takes,
To put food on plates to fake the taste!
Yet kept are delicious promises,
One day to come.

Not for all.
But for some to have it done!


Scheme abcxa badcxxxbe xxx ffxxgxxxhxijb dajcghxexbx KxKixxxx xj
Poetic Form
Metre 010011101 1010 11111111 10101101 10101011 101 0100111 11001001 1111111 01101 1111111 1 11001110 0101 111011100 10111000 0100010 111011010 010110111 1 1110010 1101101 010111110101 10001110 001111011 10110 1011 10110 11110010 1001 01001 01101 111010010 0100101100 01 10 01 100111 101 1010101 01 1111111 11001011 1111111 110100 01111 111111101 111010100 1111 111 1111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,357
Words 281
Sentences 41
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 9, 3, 13, 11, 8, 2
Lines Amount 51
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 153
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Written on March 22, 2024

Submitted by lpahtillah on March 22, 2024

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