Analysis of Does it pose madness

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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Does it pose madness

I walk in the footsteps through the desert of those before me. As I do this there's a figure in the window of a distant house giving me the eye and wondering what's on my brain. They've grown used to others walking by just disappearing like into the horizon of which they've  never met. A low of sadness lingers just above a haze in our field of vision. Seeing things without explanation makes your mind searching and wondering for answers that may satisfy your curiosity but would still remain speculation on your part. Looking out the window daily just creates more questions that pile up on the ones from yesterday and they remain  unanswered. It becomes a nasty circle that lacks productivity and twists my stomach into a knot. When it's a circle that presents no break in the form of a way out I'm distine to go mad with endless round and round.


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Poetic Form Quinzaine  (33%)
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Characters 885
Words 160
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 237
Words per line (avg) 54
Letters per stanza (avg) 355
Words per stanza (avg) 81
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Written on March 06, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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