Analysis of In his remembrance



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In his remembrance

A man's essence through the memory of him lingers in all the places people grew used to seeing him at. Only as he stood among those places is his touch on life to those that knew him can change still come even though he is in a memory alone. During his life he didn't want to rule anyone he wanted to create love and loyalty through his actions of kindness and respect towards all that he came across. The only threat he wanted to be was to those that hated and lead with hate through his treatment of them with love and ownership of them interms of their own lives. No matter how a person chose to act he demanded that good or bad they took ownership of their choice and all the baggage that came with it. In life a person cannot be a certain way and not take full responsibility for their choices.  If a person is bad they are going to upon taking ownership of it they will get sick of the poison they are living under. In life there are so many ways to reach a person through gentle wisdom and the lesson is more easily absorb when the said person is forced to own their disposition and all its outcomes. God is love.


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Poetic Form Quinzaine  (33%)
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Characters 1,154
Words 224
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 306
Words per line (avg) 74
Letters per stanza (avg) 460
Words per stanza (avg) 112
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Written on February 24, 2024

Submitted by rjenavy on February 24, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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