Analysis of Nightfall



Pelican spout on the rocky plymouth
White plumage fading silver of feathers
A dough of cotton tuffs in the ciel
Turned to grey tinged sea of blue, rabbit's hat
 As day glides down crystal balistades, wistful
Onward we row our boat, crowds of gulls blanket the shore
Ceiling of twilights, a sea-fairing low mist that twas upon us...créspuscule.

I picked 'blank verse' as the poem style as there were no other options. I'm not sure the style of the poem I wrote. It has a flow to it like music, like a brook.


Scheme XXAXXXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 1001101010 1101010110 011101001 111111111 111110110 10111011111001 101101111110111 1111101011101101011101101011110111110101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 508
Words 96
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 198
Words per stanza (avg) 47

About this poem

It tells a story in the beginning, of a pelican but that is not all. The story is what it could be like by the sea if we could see. Notes: Two french words were used: ciel and créspuscule. The translation for ciel was sky, créspuscule was nightfall. If perhaps it's wrong, my sincere apologies.

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Written on January 04, 2024

Submitted by purplef on January 05, 2024

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