Analysis of Twin Brothers

Mathew Thankachen 1955 (Thalachira)



Satan, the father of death,
My dearest friend,
And thou are no more foe,
Stay with me day and night,
Right from my birth,
 Side by side with Life.

The one stronger and deeper
Than the other, excelling
To overtake with your
 Trick, overwhelming life
So fascinating, enchanting
Justifying every thought,
Selflessly for me and me alone,
So cozy you make me overnight
To follow your way.

In a lighter vein, you reign,
In the realm of mind and body,
Leading to death, lethargy
Oozing away the Life within -
The presence of God-
 The life force, love, energy
Enthusiasm here and now.

And I don’t need another proof,
Of the roof you promised,
In your Father’s house,  
You, twin brothers,
Ever together,
Only but to depart,
Either way to hell or heaven.


Scheme XXXAXB CDXBDXXAX XEEXXEX XXXXCXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1001011 1101 011111 111101 1111 11111 0110010 1010010 11011 10101 1100010 1001001 1110101 110111101 11011 0010111 00111010 1011100 10010101 01011 0111100 0100101 01110101 101110 01101 1110 10010 101101 10111110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 770
Words 161
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 9, 7, 7
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 144
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

This poem tells how the Electronic media and other worldly forces with its “sweet enchantment” gradually “chokes” God’s image (enthusiasm”) in man. The theology of ‘original sin’ and ‘toleration’ of ‘tendency to sin’ as an ‘unavoidable human trait” is depicted following the Dictum of Jesus, “remove not the weeds, lest the seed may be lost”. (Mt.13: 24. A poem blending theology and psychology of the “Original sin” and how often in the contemporary world, an individual give in for the satanic forces (temptations). In man, the inclination to sin co-exists with an inclination seeking good (God), the success of the either force determines the destiny of man – success or failure, hell or heaven. A resonance to the “co-existence of the parable of weed and seed” is reflected in this poem). 

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Mathew Thankachen

A retired English teacher. Born and brought up in Kollam, Kerala, India. I am interested in writing poetry and socio-political matters. I too write on the moral and religious degradation of society and Church. Most of my political articles are published in 'Indian Currents', New Delhi and Religious matters 'online' 'Indian Catholic Matters', Bangalore. A few of my poems found light in ' Communicator' published from De Pere, Wisconsin. more…

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