Analysis of Who is she?



The person I used to be.
Bright eyes and wide smile.
Her laughter echoes through my head,
Like a gentle breeze dancing through trees.

Look in the mirror I can not see,
The person I used to be.
Close my eyes and I know why
Her laughter quiets and smile fades.

All this time and all that’s happened,
This place I feel I am trapped in.
Her laughter no longer echoes,
She’s forgotten and lost.
Screaming and crying,
Just wanting to be.

The person I used to be.
Missing her laughter and real smile,
Unlike the one I paint on now.
I just miss the happy little girl,
I once was.


Scheme Abxx aAxx xxxxxa Abxxx
Poetic Form
Metre 0101111 11011 01010111 101011011 100101111 0101111 1110111 01010011 11101110 11111110 01011010 101001 10010 11011 0101111 10010011 01011111 111010101 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 579
Words 131
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 6, 5
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

This poem is about things that happened in my life that changed me as a person and how I miss who I used to be when I was younger and carefree. Not having to worry and just having fun.

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Written on January 31, 2024

Submitted by xxbruhcorvoxx07 on January 31, 2024

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Lillyan Hunter

I live in a beautiful quiet rural area and enjoy spending most of my time writing, reading, and spending time outdoors with my family. I love writing poems and fiction pieces. I also enjoy fishing, boating, and swimming. more…

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