Analysis of It Would Not Be Fair To Her (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



It Would Not Be Fair To Her   (Bussokusekika)

I know that one day
My twin flame and I will meet
Maybe not today
Possibly  in our future
I have baggage I must shed
It would not be fair to her

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   1/26/2024


Scheme X AXABXB X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 11111 1110111 10101 10001010 1110111 1111110 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 233
Words 47
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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Who knows what this one is about…Single just may be my twin flames name…At least I’ll know for a fact that she is not a narci…

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Written on January 26, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on January 26, 2024

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