Analysis of Even in space



Beauty takes human form in her
The girl who makes me feel like me, a feeling that’s warm and cozy
Like cuddling by the fire, or hot chocolate on a cold winters day.

The way her soft brown hair falls perfectly, and the way her eyes crinkle when she smiles.
How her mind is beautiful and she is oh so very smart.
I could run 93 million miles, the distance between the sun and the earth, and I’d still have enough breath left to tell her how amazing she is.

I want her in a way that’s long conversations about nothing, and celebrations and happiness over everything.
I want to be there for her in the way the rings never leave Saturn.

We are two stars dangling in the sky, though even the closest ones are worlds apart
but I’m still shining my light to help her see what lays beneath.


Scheme XXX XAX XX AX
Poetic Form
Metre 10110100 0111111101011010 11010101110101101 0101111100001011111 101110001111101 111101010010100101110111110101011 110001110100110001001001010 11111100010110110 111110000111001011101 111101111011101
Characters 796
Words 160
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 2, 2
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 61
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 153
Words per stanza (avg) 38

About this poem

It is a love poem I wrote for a girl I like. I wanted to capture how beautiful I think she is, whole trying to add that I like her more emotionally & romantically then sexually

Font size:
 

Written on December 10, 2023

Submitted by Madisonlynnmac on December 11, 2023

48 sec read
0

Discuss this Madison Macquarrie poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Even in space" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 9 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/177835/even-in-space>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    22
    days
    4
    hours
    46
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem "Still I Rise"?
    A Dylan Thomas
    B Maya Angelou
    C Robert Burns
    D Elizabeth Barrett Browning