Analysis of Lost in my thoughts
3 years ... Wasted time
Cant say it was all bad , it put me back up on my grind
Done paid off that 40 racks in fines
I done lost my mind,
Plenty days n nights i done cried
Thought i had love, but was completely blind
Said u my friend, heard wat i told u thru the vine
Broken spirits, Mental Visits, maybe i should recreate my plan
Aint no beach without the Sand
Aint no success without sum bands
Not worrying bout no shoots till i buy sum land
Self driven with no helpin hands
The shit i been through will make u fold ur hands
Lord please help me to get over this
So mad i grit my teeth n ball my fist
If u dealt with a lotta pain then u gone feel my drift
Heart been heavy like the clouds when it mist
Feel like a tumor on my brain or a cyst
People play in ya face like u a clown
The shit i swam thru another wud of drown
Super sayen powers like im on a nimbus cloud
Its a drake beat ur heart love the sound
Aint no loyalty or no friend up here i done found
Aint no rap this is poetry my soul too proud
Payed my karma in full when i hit the ground
God done saved me for praising him out loud
Did it by myself never had a crowd
Now i bow my head when im feelin doubt
Not a boy but im the scout
Did it for the pay never needed clout
Scheme | XAXAXAX XBCBCC XDXDD EEFGGF GFFHHH |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 1101 11111111111111 1111101 11111 10111111 1111110101 111111111101 1010101010111011 1110101 11010111 110011111111 1101111 01111111111 111111101 1111111111 11110101111111 1110101111 11010111101 1010111101 01111010111 101101110101 101111101 1110011111111 111111001111 11100111101 1111110111 111110101 111111111 1011101 1110110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,243 |
Words | 277 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 6, 5, 6, 6 |
Lines Amount | 30 |
Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 191 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 53 |
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I get lost in my thoughts and i cry ....
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