Analysis of Are you ready for God's request

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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Are you ready for God's request.

The burden for the observer and traveler remains high as they have to watch from near and far the blyth of man over and over again. Their blood keeps flowing in despair as they have to witness again and again the tragedies of man trying to change the way of thinking among those who cause the disasters and they cannot lay hands on or be seen. In each dramatic moment it seems they never make any progress and they don't know how much more their heart can take. They try and remember why God has bestowed this task upon them and when. Solidifying any hope and or positivity in their disposition seems hopeless. They ask what are we missing with each visit to the timeline that could better the outcome. Is it us. In closing their eyes they will keep trying as it is God's desire that they do.


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Characters 840
Words 158
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 224
Words per line (avg) 52
Letters per stanza (avg) 336
Words per stanza (avg) 78
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Written on December 20, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on December 20, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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